VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.2] [Eva Kiss]

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Esti

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ffive said:
I disagree, being a deceitful snake is quite major deal. Especially if it involves fucking one's boyfriend behind your back while acting as your friend.
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It is major deal if we take the act separately. Lying to someone, fucking someone's boyfriend. But it's just general not very moral behavior. Bad, but understandable. And why would she feel something for the emotional well being of her adversary of all people? Compared to the things Gillian and Axel had done it's... nothing.


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she actually had every reason for it -- revealing to Lena she was fucking Axel would potentially allow her to take Lena's place after Axel/Lena relationship blew up over it (we know it wouldn't happen but that's the benefit of hindsight. Cherry herself says she thought she had such chance, after Lena left Axel)
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It doesn't work that way. Revealing that you are fucking someone's boyfriend would just piss said boyfriend off, cause he will lose another willing pussy or, maybe, more than that. I could understand if she would be stupid enough to think like that, but she wasn't and said nothing.
 
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mommysboiii said:
yeah I can already see ivy and lena (maybe even cindy,holly will end there with ivy influance ) shaking there asses infront of the camera and end in some weird soft porn/porn scenario at the end of the story

billy is sus I dont trust him at all :devilish:
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I wouldn't say sus, I think he's just some guy enjoying his life, his influence and success makes him chased by hot girls looking for an opportunity and he's taking advantage of that.
He doesn't give those dangerous vibes i get from Seymour, I would say he's more like Tyrone.
 
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paulzezima99 said:
What do people think of the Ian/Minerva route?
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Good on his own, but its very detached from the rest of Ian's social circle. That's not necessary a problem, but can become one the more and more it solidifies from a casual fling to a longer lasting relationship (which the heart and not-chad -hatefuck options lead to). It would make Ian a hypocrite if he still laments and sobs about Gillian, when he does a similar thing to someone else, so this character inconsistency has to be dealt with. Regardless, it can be delightful once Ian's other partners like Lena, Cindy or Alison know about it and manifest a rivalry with Minerva <3
 
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Ivy berates Lena, Holly and Louise that they don't get proper attention with their attitude.

Lena: Ian, Robert, Mike, Jeremy, Axel, working on Seymour, Stan, Mark and Billy
Holly: Ian, Mark, working on Marcel, Robert and Stan
Louise: Jeremy, Mike and Ian

Shy Virgin Ivy: Touched Jeremey's pp and got into close contact with Ian omg~
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Shy Virgin Ivy is too busy making mint on Stalkfap, the way she teaches Lena to do.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
Louise deserves better in the poll through.
Yes shes annoying.
Yes shes inmature.
Yes shes dumb.
But damn,her sex scenes are hot!
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Got to love how Lena is supposed to be written as this sympathetic character, yet she uses her supposed "friend" for sex, taking her feelings for granted. This is exemplified by her unceremoniously kicking her ass out of bed after the threesome with Ian. Lol. Scenes are hot, but come on Eva. Give us a path where she isn't such an ass.
 
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Xupuzulla said:
Louise deserves better in the poll through.
Yes shes annoying.
Yes shes inmature.
Yes shes dumb.
But damn,her sex scenes are hot!
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Louise got a bad hand in every case until now.
1. Of all the potential partners, she is stuck with Jeremy, who is a poor choice of partner for her, due to both of them having different expectations of this relationship. If she isn't breaking up with him, she only keeps up with him because of him and Lena's demands to keep being together, very likely leading into cucking.
2. Relationship with Lena is decent for lesbian content and femdom, but her clingyness is really off-putting. It's one-dimensional and effectively leads to further punish her to enhance the femdom route, but its shit otherwise.
3. She is a whiny bitch and not even sympatetic due to her horrible treatment of Stan (I don't care about that fucker as well, but just leave him alone in his room, woman), potentially even disappears from the game to spare Eva from further being forced to include her in non Jeremy/Lena routes.

My hope is that she applies for a job under Ian and/or Ian is further interested in her after the threesomes, the two of them possible seeking each other out if Jeremy and Lena keep being unfaithfull. Louise is a bitch, but she isn't dealt a decent hand either. Maybe someone else than Jeremy would change that.
 
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Gato21 said:
Got to love how Lena is supposed to be written as this sympathetic character, yet she uses her supposed "friend" for sex taking her feelings for granted. This is exemplified by her unceremoniously kicking her ass out of bed after the threesome with Ian, Lol. Scenes are hot, but come on Eva. Give us a path where she isn't such an ass.
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Hooker her up with Stan, make her humble and less of a bitch. Problem solved.
 
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SerHawkes said:
Hooker her up with Stan, make her humble and less of a bitch. Problem solved.
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Stan doesn't have a magic cock that will fix the inconsistency of Lena as a character. Lena is simply a product of Eva's writing trying to cover all bases.
 
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Esti said:
It is major deal if we take the act separately. Lying to someone, fucking someone's boyfriend. But it's just general not very moral behavior. Bad, but understandable. And why would she feel something for the emotional well being of her adversary of all people? Compared to the things Gillian and Axel had done it's... nothing.
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Being capable of understanding emotions of another person and feeling for them is basic empathy and something which sets apart regular people from psychopaths. Am not sure if it's really in favor of Cherry to put her on the shelf with the latter. And it's really not "nothing", Cherry had active role in hurting Lena. She knew exactly what she was doing, she knew how Lena was going to feel when that affair comes out but did it regardless. It's the same selfishness we see in Gillian.

Am not saying it's not understandable. But it's simply behavior of a shit human being, and that's what Cherry ultimately is. She doesn't need nor deserves to be excused for her actions.

It doesn't work that way. Revealing that you are fucking someone's boyfriend would just piss said boyfriend off, cause he will lose another willing pussy or, maybe, more than that. I could understand if she would be stupid enough to think like that, but she wasn't and said nothing.
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Leaving aside people in love are ready to do a lot of objectively stupid things which to them make perfect sense, she didn't need to do the reveal in person. Tipping Lena off anonymously would work just as well.
 
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Louise got a bad hand in every case until now.
1. Of all the potential partners, she is stuck with Jeremy, who is a poor choice of partner for her, due to both of them having different expectations of this relationship. If she isn't breaking up with him, she only keeps up with him because of him and Lena's demands to keep being together, very likely leading into cucking.
2. Relationship with Lena is decent for lesbian content and femdom, but her clingyness is really off-putting. It's one-dimensional and effectively leads to further punish her to enhance the femdom route, but its shit otherwise.
3. She is a whiny bitch and not even sympatetic due to her horrible treatment of Stan (I don't care about that fucker as well, but just leave him alone in his room, woman), potentially even disappears from the game to spare Eva from further being forced to include her in non Jeremy/Lena routes.

My hope is that she applies for a job under Ian and/or Ian is further interested in her after the threesomes, the two of them possible seeking each other out if Jeremy and Lena keep being unfaithfull. Louise is a bitch, but she isn't dealt a decent hand either. Maybe someone else than Jeremy would change that.
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Yes Jeremy is a dickwad but Louise should have been smart enough to eventually figure that out without Lena telling her or seeing Jeremy begging Ivy to suck him off. On the flip side, you could argue Jeremy should have corrected her and said he never asked for a serious committment. So yeah, both are idiots, both are full of shit, and their "relationship" if you can even call it that was destined to self destruct from the very beginning.
 
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Gicoo said:
3. She is a whiny bitch and not even sympatetic due to her horrible treatment of Stan (I don't care about that fucker as well, but just leave him alone in his room, woman)
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Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room. And not spy on his flat mates having sex.

Dude is a creep and Loise simply calls it what it is.
 
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ffive said:
Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room.
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I agree, Stan is a total creep and got high potential to eat Lena's internal organs in the future, but Lena and Louise also walk around the house without pants.
Nothing wrong with running around in your underwear around the house.
 
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ffive said:
Maybe Stan should learn to at least put his pants on when he leaves his room. And not spy on his flat mates having sex.

Dude is a creep and Loise simply calls it what it is.
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Lena and Louise wander around in their underwear as well. All three of them are slouches.
Stan spying is only if he gets a hyperfixation on Lena due to her modeling for him (or does he always does it?), but yes, this is just as horrible as when Lena does it.

A good chunk of Louise insults are unfair and uncalled for, like with the rent issue.

Yikes, every character in this game is horrible. Sure most of them are hot, but I wouldn't even want to date a mental gullible doormat like Holly. Might as well call the game Our Red Flag.
 
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MF_DOOM said:
I agree, Stan is a total creep and got high potential to eat Lena's internal organs in the future, but Lena and Louise also walk around the house without pants.
Nothing wrong with running around in your underwear around the house.
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I was hoping for a redemptive arc where he gets his shit together becoming bros with Ian, but his hostility and entitlement is more likely leading to a rampage. W if a stray bullet hits Gillian. JK, kind of but not really. Gillian, IMO, didn't need to be introduced, Eva already has enough on her plate. To be fair, Holly might be the key to him improving himself. Lena is an enabler of his behavior (depending on how you play).
Gicoo said:
Might as well call the game Our Red Flag.
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:ROFLMAO:(y)
 
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Stan's scene with Lena where he helped her with Stalkfap pics is peak comedy.



Gicoo said:
A good chunk of Louise insults are unfair and uncalled for, like with the rent issue.
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I hope a good bunch of people are on Louise's side on that rent issue. What Stan did is one of the most spineless thing I ever saw in porn games.
 
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